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AMMEY MCKEAF by Jane Shoup    

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Truly, what could ever happen to Ammey McKeaf? At nineteen, the golden-hair beauty is beloved and protected, not only by her father, The McKeaf, the most revered General in Azulland, but also by five elder brothers, champions of the games, all. And yet all is not well in Azulland. The greedy, ambitious Marko Corin of Bellux-Abry, seeks to gain control of the island country by way of forced annexations and terror. His small bands of highly trained soldiers, known as wolf packs, roam the country, reaping havoc, destruction and death. When a pack strikes close to the Forge, home to the McKeafs, Ammey is escorted to sanctuary. But sanctuary is a thing of the past.

Fear and violence is spreading like a liquid stain across the land. Someone has summoned a dark entity to aid their cause, and Ammey is swept up in events that take her from the lush seclusion of the southern valley to the grand, northernmost city of Bellux-Abry. Torn from home, kith and kin, she will be trained, tested and put through trials of endurance as she battles to survive and protect those in her care. All her life, Ammey has fought for respect and control in her male dominated world, but as events unfold, she questions her abilities and her strength. From the heart of Vilhae Forest, home to the seidh, long thought of as witches, into the heart of Vincent of Forzenay’s Five, the infamous assassins of Azulland, and, eventually, into the clutches of a king, Ammey’s journey affects all who share it with her.

EXCERPT :

Ammey rode behind Zenon nearly the entire way to Wydenyl without uttering a word. Not only was she being forced to go into seclusion, she was not even allowed to ride her own horse. As if she was a helpless child, or perhaps it was that she was not trustworthy enough to stay put. It was insulting.

“They only want what’s best for you,” Cael said, trying to make conversation again.

“Why are men always so certain they know what’s best?” Ammey retorted.

Cael laughed. “Is that why you wore the tunic and leggings? To get back at them?”

Ammey gave him a sour look. “I always ride in them. How childish do you think I am, Cael?”

“No, not childish,” he replied, shaking his head, but still smiling broadly. “I’m only concerned for the effect you’ll have on the holy men.”

“I brought an overgown to put on,” she replied in a disgusted tone. “They’ll never see--”

A woman’s terrified scream split the air, and Cael and Zenon reacted, reining in their mounts sharply.

“Do you smell that?” Zenon asked quietly. Ammey felt his body tense, not fully cognizant that hers had, as well.

The wind suddenly shifted and the smell of smoke was heavy in their nostrils. Another scream, this one punctuated.

Zenon was suddenly furious at himself for not being more on guard. He shifted and offered his arm to Ammey. “Get down. Stay here.”

She obeyed without argument. This she did because of the screams, because she understood their duty to find the cause. They did have to answer to her father and brothers. Still, they were just outside of Wydenyl, an ancient village settled by separatist druids a thousand years past. There were not many of the order left, but those that were, the village fathers, were pacifists, holy men, and Wydenyl was considered sanctum sanctorum. Whatever was happening could not be too terrible. Perhaps a woman was being flogged for setting fire to an enemy’s house. It was terrible for the woman, of course--

Ammey imagined what Tom’s surly reply would have been. “Always one to let your imagination run away with you.”

Ammey held up her hand to ward off the morning glare, and watched as Cael and Zenon approached the eastern gate. Without warning, Cael jerked around, coming completely off his horse. He was facing her now, an incredulous look on his face. It was so bizarre a sight, Ammey nearly laughed out loud, but then Cael dropped to his knees, and Ammey’s amused expression vanished, replaced by one of horror as saw the dart stuck in this throat. A single line of blood ran from its poisoned tip.

In the instant it took for his body to fall forward, Ammey was snatched from behind, a strong hand clamped over her mouth. “Don’t make a sound,” a man hissed in her ear. “The village is under siege.” She was dragged backwards into a grove of trees and further, into a furry bana tree. The soft, pliable limbs engulfed and hid them from view, but they also prevented her from seeing what was happening, and Zenon was still out there. Cael was hurt. She tried to pull the hand from her face, but her effort only resulted in her captor assuming a tighter grip. She panicked and strained against it, shaking the limbs of the furry bana.

“Do you wish to die?” he hissed. “There are a dozen men out there who wish nothing more than to ravage your body until you’re dead.”
She stopped struggling. The description was too close to what had happened to Julia, and the thought made her feel ill. Indeed, she heard distant male voices and stopped breathing.

“Should we burn them with the others?” one called.

Them. Burn them with the others. The words rang over and over again in her mind.

“No,” came a brusque reply. “Leave them. Let’s go.”

There was the sound of several horses, riding away.

Ammey’s captor loosened his grip, but did not let go of her. It no longer mattered. She felt weak with fear and grief, so much so that the arms around her had become a comfort. Seconds passed, minutes. Ammey sunk into the hold, her entire being shaking with the beat of her heart.

“They’re gone,” a deep, male voice spoke from a short distance away.

Her captor finally released his hold. “You can go,” he said.

She moved her jaw, still feeling the imprint of his hand on her face, and tried to move, but suddenly, her legs weren’t able to.

“You can go,” the man repeated.

She reached out an arm and clutched a soft limb, but her legs would not cooperate with her wish to move.

Apparently impatient with her, the man wrapped an arm around her waist and dragged her out, just as he had dragged her in.

She winced at the sunlight as they immerged from the tree, so quickly had her eyes adjusted to the shade of the furry bana. A man with black skin gaped at her, and two other men were moving toward them. “You take shelter in a tree and come out with that?” the black man asked. Was he a Moor? She had seen black men before, though not many. The sight of him was strange to her.

“She was with the two that rode in,” her captor spoke.

Ammey saw Cael and Zenon lying on the ground and she rushed to them, past the dark skinned man, who turned to watch her.

Zenon was face up, staring sightlessly at the sky; Cael was face down. Ammey dropped to her knees and felt for signs of life in Zenon, despite the certainty of his death stare. She reached for Cael, next. They were dead. Dead. Because they’d brought her to this place. They were young, healthy, handsome men, neither of whom had seen their twenty-fifth winter yet, and they were dead. They’d been trusted friends and far too valuable to die for no reason. She’d said they were too valuable to be wasted on escorting her! Hadn’t she said that? Furious, agonizing grief tore a sob from her chest.

“Where did you come from?” the black man asked her. He’d walked close, as had the others, four of them.

She looked up at the black man, incensed by his calm. “Wydenyl was attacked, and you just stand there?” she demanded. Her voice was shaking as hard as the rest of her. Her face was wet with tears that would not stop.

“We should go,” one of the men spoke with urgency to his voice. “The village is burning.”

It was true. The roaring and crackling of fire was stronger now. Wydenyl was burning. Her gut and her chest were burning. Cael and Zenon were dead because of her. The wind shifted, enveloping them all in a smoke so thick, she couldn’t see.

“Let’s go,” the black man ordered. “We have to get downwind.”

“No,” she argued, getting to her feet. “We have to help them.” A hand closed in on her and began pulling her away. “Unhand me! We have to help them!”

The hand let go of her, but a second later, she felt pressure on her stomach, followed by the sensation of being lifted off the ground. Someone had thrown her over their shoulder and was hurrying away. Ammey, choking on both the smoke and her embarrassment, pounded the man’s back with her fists. “Put me down!”

He answered with a stinging series of slaps to her rear end, made more potent by the thin fabric of her leggings. It worked to increase both her humiliation and her ire and she pounded harder. So did he. When he finally set her down in a smoke-free clearing, she launched herself forward at him, red-faced in her fury. He must have been expecting the move because he grabbed her wrists as she came at him, slung her around and then sat her on the ground. “You hit me first,” he reminded her. “And there is nobody left to help!”

Even scowling, he was extremely handsome, which only served to increase her humiliation. His hair was brown, his beard and mustache neatly trimmed, his eyes a rich golden brown.

The black man, obviously the leader of the band, knelt on one knee. “We have much to do, little hellcat, so perhaps you could simply tell us who you are and what you and your friends back there were doing.”

“Or perhaps you could tell me who you are and what you were doing,” she came back at him. Her behind was smarting, her face hot with mortification and rage.

“Forzenay’s the name,” he replied.

She drew in a sharp breath, not expecting this.

“You’ve heard the name,” he remarked.

“The assassin?” she said in a suddenly small voice. “Forzenay’s Five,” she murmured, looking at the others. The infamous assassins of Azulland.

“This is Kidder,” Forzenay said, gesturing to one of the men. “Graybil, Stripe--” he gestured to a man with a stripe-like scar on one side of his face. “And you’ve already met Vincent,” Forzenay finished with a smug grin, gesturing to her captor.

“Charmed,” Vincent said sardonically.

She was tempted to flail at him again, but they would only restrain her. “What are you doing here?” she demanded, directing the question to Forzenay. “And why didn’t you help them?”

“We did help, little hellcat . . . in a discreet enough manner that Corin’s men would not know.”

“You helped?” she repeated, her voice dripping with scorn. “Discreetly?”

“That’s right.”

“You did not help my friends,” she accused. “You did not help that woman I heard scream. Perhaps you were too discreet. When the victims of a massacre do not realize you exist--”

“Who are you?” Forzenay spoke sharply, interrupting her tirade.

“I am Ammey McKeaf,” she replied, raising her chin slightly.

Forzenay’s eyes narrowed, then they roamed her face. “Of course. I should have seen it.”

“Daughter of the McKeaf,” Vincent said quietly, shaking his head.

“Your father is a good man,” Stripe spoke up.

“A good friend,” Kidder added.

She frowned. “You know my father?”

“Listen to the doubt in her voice,” Vincent exclaimed. “Why would we lie?”

“I don’t know you,” she replied more calmly than she felt. “How would I know?”

“She makes a point,” Forzenay conceded.

A crash shook the ground, a painful reminder of an unspeakable loss, and Ammey turned to stare at the burning village. “All those people.”

“No,” Forzenay said. “We learned of the plan to sack Wydenyl and warned them,” he explained. “They have an underground tunnel everyone was supposed to have escaped by. I heard the woman, the same as you.” He shook his head. “Things go wrong, but most got to safety.”

Ammey breathed out, deeply surprised by this. “H-how did you learn of the attack?”

“We’ve been tracking the leaders, the planners of the raids,” Forzenay said. “As your father knows,” he added.

“My father knows?” she repeated, stunned.

“We’re on the same side, Ammey McKeaf,” Stripe added.


 

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